Monday, November 12, 2012

Yet another story like thing from me :)



 OF HOPE AND DESPAIR




Foreword
This is not the story of Love. Neither of Happiness or Sadness nor of Revenge or Euphoria. But all of them are involved in it somehow or the other.
It’s a never ending story of Hope and Despair. Also one evolved from an age old family war holding apart two lovers. The two separated apparently, but always finding a commonplace to into jump into one another, to have their moments together. As intertwined as separate… as hopeful as desperate…

*****



He desperately wished to see her today. He couldn’t be sure if he could. Unlike old days, now, every mission assigned was top secret in his family business. As a matter of fact she shouldn’t be informed of this, he knew, nor should her family be. That could topple this mission over. 
Nowadays victory over the other was a matter of family’s prestige. But he secretly wished she would turn up and interfere. Though he knew that his failure by her interference could put him to disgrace before his family, it did not matter today. ‘To hell with the age old family competition!’ he thought.  He crossed his fingers in belief that she would get the tip he sent… that she would come. His mind was all filled with Hope as he started his work…   

*****

The man sipped the final drops of rum from the bottle and flung it out. Eyes red, from crying or alcohol, hands in constant tremor, from grief or alcohol, the car moving in a serpentine fashion, certainly and solely due to alcohol. The road itself looked like a serpent twined around the hill. He drove unsteadily in top speed, either not aware or not caring the narrow escapes from falling off the road. One couldn’t tell if he wanted to die or not. Desperate as he was, without a hope to cling on to, but nevertheless still searching within himself to find a little hope and hence nothing could explain his devil-may-care driving…

*****

The wait though short, felt too long. His heart was getting intense every moment and overflowing with the destructiveness but he didn’t take it over yet. He had to wait for her. All this ransom was just to catch a glimpse of her; to hear her reason with him in her benevolent voice, never raising it, with the trust that he would obey her word by word; to feel her presence in his life; to get the drive to overcome the period of her absence after this meeting, if only she came...

*****

Atop the hill, where the road ended he stopped the car. Stopped would hardly explain the circus he played. Anyone watching would have called him being alive, the eighth wonder of the world. He got out of the car and yawned stretching his body like a bow. He looked up. The moon was partly visible now and then, cloudy as the sky was. He staggered past the stone benches and warning boards about the danger of going beyond that point...to the edge of the cliff…

*****


He remembered the spring when she was born. The most beautiful of all feelings brewed in all for the first time as she was born. As a little toddler, he had played with her soft hands for the first time, feeling  very calm for and satisfied within for the first time and that was when she had cried for the first time.

 Down the seasons that saw her growing up into the most beautiful thing on earth. Every time he touched her he felt somewhat antagonized; that with her hand in his he could feel serene and calm forever.  Back then, when they were all one small family, the elders pronounced to him, a dream he kept forever. That when time grew ripe she would be his…

*****

 The man stood at the edge of the cliff overlooking a depth made unfathomable by the fog beneath. Desperateness running through his nerves, ready to jump down to end his life, but held back by some unexplainable feeling. It was not hope for sure… what was there to hope for?!
He looked down standing ataxic at the edge of the cliff. He could end it all now. But he couldn’t make up his mind. It felt weird to him that, to die he had reasons and to keep from dying he could think of none, and yet he couldn’t make himself feel to end his life! Despair was the only thing he felt, not even a bit of hope. But then why couldn’t he jump!?  He blamed himself too drunk to think sense…


*****
 
Even with each picosecond, it was getting late. He couldn’t wait any longer, but neither couldn’t he help not wait longer. She may not have received the tip he had sent, he though. He closed his eye and tried to concentrate on the job at hand. He felt himself fuming destructively and desperately. He felt angry at his family. He felt unsatisfied with life. He was falling for his own soul’s fumes. Without Hope, he felt himself nothing. He felt like hot parched earth without rain to cool its self-destructive temper. 
Suddenly he felt her hand over his shoulder. It felt soothing and distracting. Like something enchantingly cool spreading from it. His insides felt calm, relieved. He smiled gently and opened his eyes and turned to her.
She was standing before him, clearly confused and sad, not knowing what to tell, what expression to assume. 
She started “I can’t let you do this. With the principles I was brought up with, I should stop you from doing this. But…”
He smiled and placing his palm over her cheek “So you will tell me … to do it?”
Her face turned distressed. “Why do you have to put me in this conflict?” she said sadly “These are your family’s secret jobs. You have to do them prove your loyalty to your family. I don’t want you to be branded a failure or traitor because of me. But I can’t let you do it after me knowing it. It irks my conscience .It feels a sin not to stop it. I feel helpless when you drag me into such conflicts.”
He now looked down “What else can I do to catch a mere glimpse of you?! This is the only way we can meet. I don’t mind branded a failure or a traitor by my family if that’s what it takes to be with you.”
She said mourning “But I want you to be known as the best… I wouldn’t want anyone calling you a failure, or a traitor. I wouldn’t want anyone talking ill of you.”
He said now, holding her in his arms “The best… is just a matter of perspective, ain’t it?  In your family, my work is regarded as the worst and in mine, yours, the worst. Let me be the best in accordance to your principles, for today…”
She snuggled, her face rubbing his chest. He could feel her tears over his chest. He patted her and said “Hope, I desperately love you” 
She sobbed “I know it, Despair… I hope my father “Happiness” and my elder brother “Euphoria”, would let you into our family knowing what you are doing today… Now only my younger sister Love regards high of you,maybe knowing your love for me or maybe because whenever she is forced to leave,you glorify her.”
He said capriciously “And I desperately wish that my sadistic daddy “Sadness” banishes me from his family knowing of what I am doing today”  He continued with a smile “If he does banish me does and your  family does take me in, we could be together forever…Only, I wish my brother, Revenge, doesn’t take coldblooded revenge on me for being a traitor to our family… If they don’t catch me for giving you tip on this mission and I don’t get banished, we will meet every time I get a mission I hope desperately…till I get caught some day…Now it’s time for me to leave, Hope… Lets part ,only to meet within some other mind… Now pour in some hope to this man. Save him from me. Stop him from jumping off the cliff. Hope to meet you soon, my Hope…


*****

The man felt the cool breeze blowing the fog through him. He flung out his arms and stood there at the edge of the cliff. Somewhere inside he felt an urge to live. Somewhere inside he felt a hope lingering…telling him that his life was worth more than spending on one failure’s despair...

 *******

love
 harimohan

P.S- Wrote this hearing "let go" of "the dewarists s2 e1" and edited hearing  the unplugged version of nenjukulle by ar rahman ,the song from kadal sung by shaktisree gopalan

I really enjoyed writing this one. Even as i began, i didnt have the complete thread. The hope despair lovestory was brewing for ages. I had even started writing it in a whole different way in past,but couldnt continue writing. This time, as i started off i didnt expect that i could complete it. I feared it would be finished within 300 words,then 400words,then 500,then 700. But it crossed 900, beyond that i was so into the story that i forgot to check the wordcount till it ended.
:D

P.S of P.S- I assure you,you'll notice many things u wudnt have noticed in the 1st read,in the 2nd read. so i wud say,read it twice :)